It was just another scary night when Jade the vampire awoke from her coffin and went into the night.Then she saw Frankenstein but as she was going to say “what's up” his head disappeared.She said”This is more creepy to what i'm use to”Then she screamed.Then Dracula came down to Jade”What's going on jade i heard you scream”said dracula”Oh i'm fine but frankenstein is not his head disappeared”!And with that he swiped his cape and disappeared(like always)Jade flew into a house where someone was awake and turned the light off then jumped on him and bit him after that he disappeared.Jade decide to live there.When she came out things started disappearing.She started flying real fast so was dracula he had to turn into a bat to do flying.But when her and dracula disappeared she woke up and it was back to normal it seemed to be a dream and nothing has disappeared and neither has dracula or her.
Comments from the Junior Hub
ReplyDeleteWhy did you write that story? - Alizae
Your story was scary for me to read, was it scary for you to write? - Daisy
I like how you wrote that story - Jonte
I like your story but maybe you could use white writing so we could see it better :) Hannes
Question number 1:Because i like writing horror stories
DeleteQuestion number 2:No it was not scary for me to write.
Thx jonte
ok hannes next time i will
Hi its Jasmine here from Rimu class.
ReplyDeleteCan you make the writing a bit more clear so people who vists your blog can read it if the cant.
what do u mean do u want me to change the coulor of it of what?
DeleteHi Aaliyah it's Zoey i'm just checking out your blog. I love how you said that frankin stains head dispared and things started doing it to.Maybe next time don't put a highlightl.
ReplyDeleteTHIS IS SCARY I LIKE IT I PROUD OF YOU PICTURES IT WIIL BE BETTER IF YOU MAKE IT SCARYER
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